Hey guys, I haven't wrote anything like this before but after reading some of the amazing one's on this site I decided to give it a go
 
I haven't wrote much and due to lots of work at Sixth Form etc, am unsure of how regularly I will be able to update, and wasn't even going to put this on here but Kayleigh convinced me to so here goes ...
 
Fitting with the rules I am going to say that their may be details of relationships (possible adult content) but i'm not sure So don't hold me to that hahaa!

Chapter 1.
The reflection looking back from the mirror shocked Shenice, she had known that all her efforts to look good for this night out would pay off but she wasn't expecting to look and feel this good. "You look amazing Shenice. I told you you were doing the right thing getting that little dress rather than the shorts. You have a great figure so you should be showing it off." The voice came from Shenice's best friend who was sitting on the bed, smiling, obviously happy that she had persuaded Shenice to drop the baggy hoodies and sweat pants that she seemed to favour. Tonight, even Jessica couldn't complain about the way Shenice looked, in fact she was feeling inferior in comparison. The girls had been shopping the previous day and Jessica had treated Shenice to a manicure, but the dress that Shenice chose was something only she could take the credit for it was gorgeous and showed off her figure in every possible way. The black material clung to her curves with the nipped in waistband showing just how tiny her waist really was and the neckline gave her a cleavage that every other girl in the club would be jealous of. At first, the girls planned to team the dress with some bright red sky-high heels, but when she tried them on Shenice decided that she would stick to her silver diamante converse style trainers. Well, she hadn't had them custom made for nothing! But, even with the converse Jessica thought Shenice looked amazing. After a
quick slick of lipgloss and a photo taken by Jessica's mum the girls hopped into a taxi and set off to the club.
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On the other side of London, unbeknown to Shenice and Jessica, a certain Miss Tweedy was getting dolled up to go out to celebrate the end of a recent promo tour that she had been on for her latest single. She slipped into a gorgeous cobalt blue dress, which really showed off the chestnut colours of her hair and a pair of 6inch diamante silver shoes. Just as she was checking out her appearance in the mirror the doorbell rang and she opened the door to find her dancer friend Derek Hough. "Babes," she leant in to allow Derek to give her a kiss on each cheek, "I'm just putting the finishing touches to my look, come in and have a seat," she clicked the door shut as Derek wandered into her living room and looked around. He couldn't help but notice that the large canvas print of Cheryl and Ashley, which he had noticed last time he visited, had been taken down and replaced by an Art Nouveau print which matched in perfectly with the design of the room. Derek sighed as he was worried about how Cheryl was coping but when he turned round to see her standing there, looking amazing in a little dress and a massive smile he knew that she would be okay. "Ready?" he said as he held out his arm for her to link onto. "Wheyy ayee, I can't wait to get out and let me hair down." She giggled and brushed a stray bit of hair out of her face as the pair prepared to brave the paparazzi to get into the car.
 

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"Ohhh, i would love to be able to fast-track this queue," Jessica said as she stood shivering in the cold evening air. "Jessica, all you have done is complain since we got here, your going to get in aren't you?" Shenice was quite enjoying the cool breeze as she knew how hot she would be after dancing about inside the club for a few hours. "Yes, but i just hate ... Ooooooh the queue's moving!" Shenice laughed and moved forward with the rest of the queue.
 
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Ohh Derek <3
ahh bless Cheryl <3

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Ohh Derek <3
ahh bless Cheryl <3

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Thanks hun, do you think it's looking/sounding okay?

Chapter 1 is amazing!! I really like it and I think you should do more

Chapter 1 is amazing!! I really like it and I think you should do more

 
Awww thankyouu hun (:
I will update it later on for you

Thank you
I really really like it and I can tell you put a lot of thought into it.

xx

"You VIP mate?" A bouncer asked the driver as Cheryl and Derek's car pulled up at the side of the club. "Yeah i've got Tweedy and Hough," the driver told the bouncer in a matter of fact tone. "Okay, well turn left into the drop-off zone and somebody will meet you there to escort them in. Enjoy your night." The car set off again and followed the directions where, as promised two burly blokes were waiting to escort Cheryl and Derek into the club's VIP lounge. "Do you ever feel sorry for the people queueing up outside?" Cheryl asked as she climbed out of the car. "Babes, only you could worry about the people queueing up," Derek laughed at how thoughtful Cheryl really was. "Well they must be cold waiting to get in." The pair were helped up a flight of stairs by the two bouncers. When they reached the top they opened a door and allowed Cheryl and Derek to enter the VIP lounge. "Enjoy your night."
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"Two gin and tonic's please," Jessica confidently told the barman what it was she wanted, the guy obeyed of course and even though Jessica had given him a cheeky wink his attention was well and truly on her friend who was quite easily the prettiest girl he had set eyes on for a while. He handed over the drinks and took the change, wishing he had to confidence to ask for her number but unfortunately he wasn't that brave. The girls walked away from the bar and sat down in one of the booths which had just become available. "That barman was giving you the eye," Jessica joked as she picked up some leaflets from the middle of the table. "No he wasn't, he was probably looking at you," Shenice found that she was blushing at the thought of having an admirer. As Jessica sat flicking through leaflets, Shenice allowed her eyes to wander around the room. She took in all of the girls wearing barely any clothes, and the guys who allowed their eyes to wander all over the girls' flesh. Jessica glanced over the leaflets and looked at her best friend, she sighed because she wished that Shenice would only realise how pretty she really was and that she had more admirers than Jessica had had hot dinners.
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Derek set down a tray of drinks on the table as it hadn't taken them long to meet up with people they knew. "Aww thank you Derek, your a gem," praised Cheryl's best friend Kimberley Walsh who was enjoying a night out with her boyfriend Justin. Derek slid into the booth beside Cheryl and instantly sparked up a conversation. "So, are you girls planning on a Girls Aloud reunion then?" Justin rolled his eyes, "Well all the time they spend talking and texting about it, i think they have world domination planned mate." The girls laughed and Cheryl started to explain about the girls' plans for a future tour and album. Derek listened intently, clearly captivated by whatever it was Cheryl had to say. Kimberley stole a glance at him and smiled, she was happy that Derek was looking out for Cheryl, she knew that he would keep her right and treat her like a princess and what more could a girl want for her best friend? Justin was flicking through a small pile of leaflets which had been cleverly arranged in the middle of the table. His eyes scanned one of them and instantly picked out the words 'Street Dance-Off' his brain ticked over and then he decided that perhaps this could be important enough to interrupt the girls' future plans. "Erm, girls, have you seen this?" He handed Kimberley the leaflet and she read the information out loud. "For one night only, our resident DJ will be dropping some Urban beats whilst you are all given a chance to shine and show off your best moves. Come along and take part or just observe some of the best movers in the city." Cheryl looked at Derek excitedly, "It sounds great, when is it Kimba?" "Erm ...," Kimberley's eyes quickly scanned the leaflet, "Tonight, but in the normal section of the club. I doubt we will be able to go babes." Cheryl looked so disappointed, Derek knew he had to do something. "Be right back," he said and he left the table in the direction of a club official.

I love it!! And thanks for posting! ((: you're awesome!